ORACLE

2/14/2010

One Page Dungeon Map (v0.2)


Following up my previous post, here is an updated version of my One Page Dungeon map. I spent some time today trying to refine the layout, and make it a little nicer to look at. So far so good I think. I doubt I will make any additional changes unless I receive a suggestion that warrants a change. As usual, feedback is greatly appreciated!

7 comments:

James said...

My only concern would be level 4. I'm not conversant enough with the contest rules, but, as level 4 extends beyond the map, I'm wondering if that's would be an issue, as it effectively makes the dungeon larger than one page.

Shane Mangus said...

James,

You may have a point there. I will need to make sure this isn't going to be a problem with the contest. Once I post the finished product it will become clear that the actual exploration portion of the adventure will come to an end on cavern level 3. We will see...

Thanks for the feedback,

Shane

Aaron E. Steele said...

Very nice map! Yes, check to make sure your map is on-side (if there is some dispute, you might mention that last years winner had a set of falls leading to a deeper part of the dungeon, therefore, it was not a self-contained map either...)

R.R. Hunsinger said...

Outside of the map, and I have an inside track.....I loved it....old school all the way. I felt I was reading an old alphabet series adventure.

Shane Mangus said...

Thanks guys! For me the main challenge for this project was to introduce Lovecraftian elements without loosing the D&D-ism of the whole thing, and just become a reworking of a Call of Cthulhu adventure. I should have the final product posted in a few days.

The Venomous Pao said...

I love the map, Shane. Great work! I can't wait to see the final.

swords said...

wao such a very good map its so helpful. thanks for sharing this informative post.